Monday, September 23, 2019
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
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2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
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Hello autumn my name is blake I am year 6 at parkview school.
ReplyDeleteI like you speech beacue it was so good.
Hi Autumn, I love this speech so much, and agree with it in every way! I love how you have decorated it and how you added a gif at the end, it looks very professional. The tragic topic that you have chosen for your speech really needs to be assessed. Maybe, you could have added more slides that are not focusing on only a single animal, but all the animals, and how the human race sucks, what I mean, it maybe focus a bit more on the bigger picture. You still did a fabulous job at getting the point through and really convinced the reader (me) That we seriously need to do something about this. It is an urgent matter. You did a great job with your slide, thanks!
ReplyDelete-Your friend at Parkview Parua school, Andrea