juniper is a green planet with "ewoks" on it, it is in a galaxy called the lunar system and it is the 4th biggest planet in the lunar system
in retrospected i should have made juniper a capital letter and put the names of the moons
Wednesday, March 18, 2020
juniper, the made up planet
for literacy this week we have been doing space so we all made up a planet and made a fact file about it.
juniper is a green planet with "ewoks" on it, it is in a galaxy called the lunar system and it is the 4th biggest planet in the lunar system
in retrospected i should have made juniper a capital letter and put the names of the moons
juniper is a green planet with "ewoks" on it, it is in a galaxy called the lunar system and it is the 4th biggest planet in the lunar system
in retrospected i should have made juniper a capital letter and put the names of the moons
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Hi Autumn
ReplyDeleteI really like the layout of your Fact File, especially the way you have lined up the information and thought about displaying it in a clear way. Next time you do a blog post, remember to include what you did well in the reflection too, not just what you could improve on. I noticed you added in what we talked about with the capitals; make sure you check this in the rest of your blog post as well.